Palin's Resignation: The Edited Version

If you watched Sarah Palin’s resignation speech, you know one thing: her high-priced speechwriters moved back to the Beltway long ago. Just how poorly constructed was the governor’s holiday-weekend address? We asked *V.F.’*s red-pencil-wielding executive literary editor, Wayne Lawson, together with representatives from the research and copy departments, to whip it into publishable shape. Here is t

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雑誌編集者によるセーラ・ペイリンの辞任演説に対する厳しい突っ込み。オバマの国だからなｗ。でも、添削よりも書き直したほうが早そう。

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サラ・ペイリンのひとの辞職スピーチ原稿に編集者が赤入れまくってみるテスト。容赦ねー。